I agree with the issue that children learn best by observing behavior of adults and copying it. Children in the best age can learn everything around them easily and quickly. They are the curious child, they always discover new things and learn this. So if adults have a bad behavior or do wrong things they also learning and copying it. Besides that I have a reason number two may prove that children can learn best from their family. Someone says " Children are white paper ", if they lived in the best environment they could development and vice versa. So each family has a main role in the development's their children. According to the survey, for every 10 children there will be 2 or 3 children has grown up in the bad family result in these children become a bad guy. That shows the importance of family in raising young children can affect to the children's life in the future. In short I strongly agree that children learn best by observing behavior of adults and copying it. I think the parents should more attention to the method of teaching their children as well as the attitudes and behaviors of their parents. And President Ho Chi Minh once said " Children are the future of the country ", so the parents must to be is a shining example for their children to follow.
- Children learn best by observing behavior of adults and copying it To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Many people use distance learning programmes study material post TV internet to study at home But some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university Do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1238, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...e of the country ', so the parents must to be is a shining example for their child...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, well, i think, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59913793103 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35412315068 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5672073744 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9166666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343331609438 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157447658447 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152177869844 0.0667982634062 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343331609438 0.151304729494 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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