Children should always follow their parent's advice. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In a family, children should follow parents’ advice, but it’s not always right. At the teenage age, parent’s advice is really needed for children to go in the right direction. Nevertheless, they tend to make their own decisions when they are older.
Young children who are too young to know what is wrong or right. In this period, parents who have a lot of experience of life can give them an entire view of things and lead them to make the right decision. Parents can be a teacher to help them to homework, also can be trusted friend that children may share their confidence with. There are a lot of activities they could do together such as chatting, play games, shopping, or do children’s hobbies. Parents are the best person to teach children how to come through teenager’s problem.
However, when children get older, they may pay less attention to their parents. They are more independent, and also take the form of their thoughts themselves. They may make their own decisions without their parents' advice. In this period, it’s hard for parents to lead their children to follow them. Parents can not tell them how to live as when they were young. Parents still need to follow their children, support their choice, and maybe they still parent’s advice.
In conclusion, young children always need parent’s advice on morals and safety, but not how to live when they grow older.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85355648536 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46817952257 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531380753138 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4345838698 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305183291591 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120562626681 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742572374388 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198097061197 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319018959621 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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