Children should never be educated at home by their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do who decide to do this.
Home schooling children by their parents can be argued to be a bad idea by some individuals. I agree with this statement and from my point of view, it should be carried out by professional teachers. This essay will outline the advantages and disadvantages of this.
On the one hand, educating pupils at home by their parents has some benefits. Firstly, plans can be put in place for the day in the best way that suits the offsprings and they are able to watch their progress in terms of how the juveniles learn. For example, my uncle gave up his job as a banker to teach his daughter at home who was not doing well at school. He noticed that her concentration level was declining rapidly which affected her confidence negatively. But upon home schooling her she began to thrive brilliantly and got her mojo back. It was later discovered she suffers from a form of learning disability which made it challenging for her to study in a school environment. She enjoyed 100% attention from her father without distractions. Secondly, children are able to study in a familiar atmosphere and can take time off when they want. In addition, they can go on holiday as a family as they wish without restrictions from school rules and regulations.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks that results from educating youngsters at home. First of all, one of the parents might have to quit their job to take up the role of a tutor. This, will in no doubt put financial strain on the family. For instance, my uncle struggled with paying his bills and had to be rescued by his siblings. Thus having a massive effect on his self-esteem and he found it difficult to socialize with his friends. Additionally, young adults that educated at home might not have the opportunity to interact with other young people as often as they would like. Thereby, diminishing social interaction skills which can be harmful to them later in life. Furthermore, they can miss out on structured educational programs they could be awarded if they studied in a school.
In Conclusion, I do not agree that children should be educated at home by their parents. This essay highlighted and discussed the pros and cons of doing this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73177083333 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73412077191 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536458333333 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2327471835 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5909090909 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277991224109 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850948293706 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104777043496 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230074885897 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144932992642 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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