Children today are to much dependent on computer and electronic entertainment. It would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports and games. Do you agree or disagree
Over the last two or three decades, the way electronic goods are used have changed dramatically due to the advancement in technology. As a result, a growing number of children are dependent on computer and online entertainment without being aware of the hazardous effect they provide. I strongly agree that motivating youngsters towards outdoor games would be alot better to enhance not only their health but also provide a greater future opportunities
Analysing the statement, one of the major plus point of playing games is the fact that children do not have to worry about their body maintenance. Millions of people world-wide face the difficulties related to health and fitness which further cause dangerous diseases. Obviously, the player will have advantages at this factor.
Another striking benefit is that sports person have more priveleges rather than a normal person and it creates a greater chance for being successful.
Probing ahead, one of the main underlying benefit is that if more juveniles will show involvement in sports the growth in economy would be seen and it will help to enhance the availability of services.
To conclude, I strongly agree that is more children would participate in outdoor games or sports, it would maintain the body and reduce the risk of health issues, moreover the greater option will be available in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 210, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...er the greater option will be available in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22272727273 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77983812478 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622727272727 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5499827705 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.625 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246766026615 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876935954464 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693904266213 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121092058689 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511144687761 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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