Now a days, the traffic congestion on roads are increasing which is considered to be a major problem in almost every country in the world. However, there are some solutions that could effectively reduce the congestion at society level as well as at individual level. This essay will shed some light on the reasons which scarves my solution.
Firstly, building wider roads could be an efficient method at a society level because it makes way for the vehicle to move fast during traffic. The parking area should be allocated separately in the main roads due to which the amount of congestion reduces. This can be exemplified by the plan made in Dubai city, where the government allocated separate area for parking vehicles in main road, after which 90% of the congestion was reduced and a concession was made that those who violate rules must be given severe fine by the police officials. This certainly reduces the amount of traffic at a society level.
On the other hand, reducing the amount of traffic at individual level is quite easier than reducing at society level. In the society level, it takes more time and money to solve this issue whereas an individual consumes less time with free of cost. For instance, if every individual strictly follows the rule such as not overtaking the vehicles, parking in the licensed area(parking area), obeying traffic rules, etc,. then the amount of traffic reduces to 50%. Further, the traffic could be reduced if the people does not involve in any crime such as consuming alcohol and driving the vehicle, engaging in conflict in the main roads, do not wearing seat belt, rash driving, etc. Incorporating these rules are more likely to reduce traffic at individual level and also it does not disturb any other persons who are driving in the road.
In conclusion, even though the traffic on road are increasing in every country, there are some efficient methods that could be followed by the government as well as people of the city which acts as a beneficial movement for every one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, the traffic congestion on roads are in...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, the traffic congestion on roads are in...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...parking area, obeying traffic rules, etc,. then the amount of traffic reduces to 5...
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Then
...king area, obeying traffic rules, etc,. then the amount of traffic reduces to 50%. F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87283236994 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49214744562 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511560693642 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7196465771 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13355840535 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553720330079 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038619362043 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879193495267 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223694667484 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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