City living in the 21st century is stressful and offers no advantages.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Although some aspects of city living can be really stressful for people who are not accustomed to it, the modern city provides us with a plenty of opportunities to have a better life. It is true that large cities are often overcrowded, polluted and the cost of living is higher in comparison of that in the countryside. However, some advantages like access to better facilities, cultural benefits and an adequate infrastructure reasonably attract people to live there.
With reference to the transport, convenient public transportation systems have been developed in most of modern cities, the use of which is perfectly affordable for nearly every citizen. Thus, people are provided with an alternative of getting around with a personal car which can be very stressful, especially in the rush hour.
Another obvious benefit of urban living is the existence of different ways of entertainment. Some residents enjoy going to the cinema, theatre or attending a music concert, while others prefer walking in parks in their free time. In such big cities social events are often held and for this reason you can never get bored.
On the other hand, the negative aspects of the contemporary city life can make it quite oppressive. The high level of crime in some areas can seriously disturb the people who live there. What is more, living in a big city can be much unhealthier than in the countryside.
All in all, I personally consider that the advantages of modern lifestyle outweigh any disadvantages though they should not be ignored.
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- The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five-year period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 78
- People face for greater risks in our modern way of life when they did it in there past How far do you agree or disagree 83
- There are fewer and fewer employment opportunities for graduates entering the job market and this will have serious implications for higher education.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, thus, while, it is true, what is more, with reference to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06692913386 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86846622016 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5309844761 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146913325684 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054895496922 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424179330935 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072850034561 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441415414546 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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