The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s.

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The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s.

It is widely - held belief that animals have same rights as human beings, to live a life of freedom. But, there is also a counter - argument among some sections of people who animals don't have any such rights and are contolled by human beings. So, it is matter of debate considering all such factors, before drawing any further conclusion on rights for animals.
It is generally believed that animals have rights. It is mainly because of, they also share mother earth along with human beings. They too share all resources as humans and have every right to live a life without fear of being killed or deprived to live in forests.
On the other hand, we also have people who vehemently contend that animals do not need any such special rights as humans. For ages, we have seen humans becoming prey to wild life, and this is one of the main reasons for them to disagree for equal rights to animals.
In conclusion, based on all the points discussed above it is evident that both the sections who agree and disagree have stong points to do so. In my opinion, animals kill humans only because they see him as a risk to their life. Animals can survive by eating other animals and do not necessarily cause any harm to humans until they see a threat to their lives. Whereas, humans cause all harm to animals by killing them for their meat, skin, claws, etc. He also uses their homes, the forests, for better living by cutting trees. Overall, man has to understand that animals are also are living beings like him and should consider their right to live.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ong some sections of people who animals dont have any such rights and are contolled ...
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Line 4, column 581, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...has to understand that animals are also are living beings like him and should consi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56474820144 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15138481743 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543165467626 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6236130579 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.6428571429 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185841428103 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790515847671 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506405268915 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132583284077 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474999515659 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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