Climate change is the biggest threat to life on our planet.
How accurate is this statement?
Is there any other big threat to mankind?
It is argued that climate crisis is the most significant threat to life on Earth. This essay completely agrees with this statement because it damages badly to the environment. Wars between countries can also threaten the survival of humans.
Climate change affect lives of animals because it causes imbalance in the ecosystem. Carbon emission that causes global warming can result in remarkable increase in temperature around the planet, or pollution of different resources such as water and air by hazardous waste of humans. Many species will lose their shelters and find it challenging to adapt with the situation. As a result, various creatures can be on the verge of extinction. For example, polar bears and penguins in Antarctica are expected to become extinct in 2050 as ice and glaciers on the continent will have been totally meltted.
Wars can also threaten lives of human beings. This is because of arms race and divergency of opinion between nations that could lead to many battles. Weapons with nuclear power are extremely destructive and could kill millions of people. Furthermore, many young people have to go to the army and live far from their families, and to die in vain. For instance, more than 2 million people died, and many cities were entirely demolished after the World War II, as a result of severe damage caused by military of European countries.
In conclusion, the most dangerous threat to creatures on Earth is climate change, and wars can be an enormous factor that can cause humans’ lives in danger.
- Climate change is the biggest threat to life on our planet How accurate is this statement Is there any other big threat to mankind 61
- Many students choose to study at colleges and universities that are far away from the places where they grew up Do the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks 73
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: adapting
... their shelters and find it challenging to adapt with the situation. As a result, variou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02352941176 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61068693537 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61568627451 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3170238769 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111168624729 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392312931516 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594086473291 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820783745268 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663042914907 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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