Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The cohabitation of young couples has become the subject of considerable debate during the past decades. Many people are of the opinion that living with their significant other before marriage brings about a considerable amount of benefits as it allows them to gain greater insight into each other. From my perspective, I share the same view with the above opinion as cohabitation facilitates an environment where young couples can explore and prepare themselves for their life after marriage.
To begin, one of the major advantages when it comes to the cohabitation of unmarried young adults is that they will be able to understand their partners' personalities and habits on a deeper level. Indeed, many people often put on a persona when they go on dates to impress their lovers, which can be deceiving as their negative traits are carefully concealed from their future husbands or wives. Cohabitation eliminates this problem as partners are constantly exposed to each other since they will be living under the same roof; therefore, any traits which were previously hidden will slowly resurface as time passes.
Another advantage of cohabitation is that it allows unmarried couples to prepare themselves for independent family life. In other words, cohabitating will enable couples to gain the necessary knowledge to manage a household. For example, newlyweds usually face many difficulties as they will have to navigate their way through various bills such as electricity, water, internet, and alike while also seeking jobs to sustain themselves. All of this generates an enormous burden on the relationship which can easily lead to divorce. Cohabitation before marriage prevents this from happening as they will already be equipped with the necessary skills and experience long before their marriage.
In conclusion, many people believe cohabitation brings many advantages to young adults who are still dating. In my opinion, I agree with the aforementioned view as living together enables one to explore their partner more thoroughly while also preparing themselves for the possible hardships that they may face after marriage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41317365269 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85710956169 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550898203593 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5521513771 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.076923077 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256928113141 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967209129743 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560087966865 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169542773092 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490884829921 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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