The companies and individuals should pay to clean pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some firms and humans required to give a money for make the pollution vanish. I strongly agreed with this opion and think that the bad air should be given some proceeding to make it this problem clear. This essay will discuss the above and mentioned benefits in detail with reasonable example.
First of all, mitigating pollution by who people use transportation for do acrtivities. In other words, nowdays, every single person have some transport by their self to support their activities in life, while unwittingly that is the big reason why pollution can't decreased. Consequentially, every where we go all the air was bad and our body became not healthy and difficult for breathe, because of that several of individuals and company have a high concern about our pollution and decided to paid for encouraged purification air through some wisdom by government. For instance, Indonesia providing public transportation to prompted activities of society and through this decision at least the pollution can be declined because the common tranportation have a particular track. That's why each person should be spend a bit of money for rise up welfare of inhabitants by remove the pollution.
Secondly, growth some trees can reduce bad air. All people foremost the tenageers certainly know that plant some trees can make the air being clean. Whereas, through this method able to create the greening in some location and surely will make the pollution more condusive and better because the fresh water come from the green trees. For example, in Aceh exactly in Lhokseumawe have one region where in there along way fill in with a green trees and very fresh air and if we walking around there we can feel our breathe so fresh and became more piece than another place. Thus, hopefully goverment can make some attention for conserving all of plant and keep the fresh air.
To conclude, all of participant in the country should be cares to all of situation such as bad or good circumstances particulary in pollution condition because by the pollution can determines our healthier in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
Some firms and humans required to give a money for make the pollution vanish. I strong...
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Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ly that is the big reason why pollution cant decreased. Consequentially, every where...
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Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...lution cant decreased. Consequentially, every where we go all the air was bad and our body ...
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Line 2, column 780, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... tranportation have a particular track. Thats why each person should be spend a bit o...
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Line 2, column 812, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
... track. Thats why each person should be spend a bit of money for rise up welfare of i...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: BREATHE_BREATH[4]
Message: Did you mean 'breath'? 'Breathe' is a verb.
Suggestion: breath
...we walking around there we can feel our breathe so fresh and became more piece than ano...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'determine'
Suggestion: determine
... condition because by the pollution can determines our healthier in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, at least, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01729106628 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73097295052 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561959654179 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1686016183 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.357142857 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105841754878 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394477954466 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325391031761 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710847021402 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03014620212 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.