Companies should provide sports and social facilities to local communities. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Industries are bound to invest into sports and social requirements at where they are working. In fact, expressing support for local society bring some certain benefits to these firms. So, I hola the view that companies must promote sports activities and local traditions.
To begin with, sports are becomming more and more crucial in our life which means that our bodies have to motivate to produce energy to maintain existance. In addition, arrangements of sports projects not only boost the healthy environment in the society but also become a source of motivation. Futhermore, mentality is significantly imrove due to the fact that when we do some sport activities, exhausted or stressed feelings can be effectively smooth away. Another example for the upwards of sports, during the COVID-19 pandemic, a good condition in both physic and mental heath plays a vitally important element, but to get that, what must we do? One of the answers is doing exercises- a thing that we almost forget due to the daily hectic life.
In regards to local traditions, each countries has thier own unique culture that no one or countries that inmitate. Undoubtedly, every civilizations of that area is proud of and for decades, numerous industries are creating spectacular profit, such firms can easily sponsor entertainment events. Moreover, that facilitates the society to maintain and remember their culture,which in return offer fame to the organization.For example, any folk and dance programs would allow individuals to brush up their striking and astonishing talent.
To sum up, , the game and gathering are immensely appreciable because such events could be an opportunity for emerging talents to expose their flawless and magnificent talents,in addition, constructs peaceful,congenial and civilized society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44483985765 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0507749846 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683274021352 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2415877549 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13214134403 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462079343791 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245385943722 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071311040587 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406397946611 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.