Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
Comics
Books
Radio
Television
Film
Theatre
You should write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this life, every person always spreads information to each other by using the media. Each media obviously has its own benefit, but it also certainly has a negative effect. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of some media, such as books, television, and radio.
To begin with, books are the sources of knowledge, people can spread some information by using the books, and the reader can find those information easily by reading it. It has been proven by some experts that people who like to read the books mostly have wider knowledge. Another media is television, everyone in this world definitely has ever been watching television. Television usually contains lots of news channels which are providing the newest information from all around the world. Thus, people can get the latest information fastly. Radio is also one of the media for disseminating information. Although radio is famous in the nineteenth century, it is still popular right now. Recent studies show that around 45% of the world's population gets information from the radio. As an instance, most people are likely to listen to the radio channel while driving the car.
It might be true that these several media brings out good results in a human's daily life. Nevertheless, it also gives some bad effects. Firstly, getting information from books is not effective. Surveys found that people need to read until the last page of the book to get information, and it might take more time rather than watching TV. Even though television can damage human eyes, especially if they continuously view the digital screens without rest. Based on research, humans should rest their eyes after watching the screens for more than 60 minutes. However, TV news programs mostly have more than 1 broadcast hour. Therefore, people should consume meals that contain lots of vitamin A to encounter it. The sound of the radio sometimes is not clear due to the signal problem. Hence, the information can not be heard well.
Based on the analysis above, books, televisio, and radio can be used to spread the information. Each of them have both advantages and disadvantages. Based on my experience of using them, I prefer to use the television as the source to get the latest information. Although it can damage human eyes, it can be easily encountered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...sing the books, and the reader can find those information easily by reading it. It has been prove...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...tly have wider knowledge. Another media is television, everyone in this world defi...
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Line 3, column 733, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...ent studies show that around 45% of the worlds population gets information from the ra...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a human' or simply 'humans'?
Suggestion: a human; humans
...everal media brings out good results in a humans daily life. Nevertheless, it also give...
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Line 5, column 736, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
...to encounter it. The sound of the radio sometimes is not clear due to the signal problem. He...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02583979328 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65644134539 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.347161995 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8076923077 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8846153846 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165117069996 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475237997476 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027135226634 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10065415791 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275500905198 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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