Compared to previous generations, an increasing number of people are traveling overseas for holidays.
Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?
Nowadays, more people prefer to go abroad for vacations than they did in the past. According to some, this phenomenon is the result of peoples’ financial improvement and might have detrimental effects on their countries’ economy. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows will be argued that the main reasons for the growth in the number of people spending their holidays overseas are advanced tourist agencies and the internet, and, certainly, this is a positive tendency.
There are various factors that encourage people to travel outside of their country for holidays. Firstly, by offering travelers a variety of options at a reasonable price, tourist services have made visiting overseas available. they have also added other facilities such as helping people to get a visa and accommodations. Secondly, with the help of the internet people are able to travel throughout the world. For instance, people can easily communicate with the local population when they have online translators.
spending vacation in other countries is a positive development, since this enables people to have a better understanding of their favorite culture. travelers can visit numerous historical monuments in order to deepen their knowledge of art and history. Moreover, globalization may greatly benefit from this trend. people will certainly experience a lot such as making new acquaintances, tasting local food. Thus, traveling overseas can lead to a memorable holiday.
In conclusion, it was demonstrated that various factors contribute to the increase in worldwide travel, and this is a beneficial change, as people can feel close to other cultures and mix with local traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57735849057 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98410646935 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7226007044 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300273581401 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978879237225 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489801326672 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1786931371 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310228026055 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.