Computers are becoming an essential part of education.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
in recent years, going to university or not has become an important and widely debated issue. while some people maintain that we should get a job right after high school, other reject this notion, believing that it is better to go to university or college.
To begin with some people say getting job can bring any benefits. Firstly, going work can help to save money. For instance, instead of spending money on university education, people can find a job and earn money early. Secondly, they can be more mature in comparison with who go to university. For example, they have to face and learn how to solve many problems, so they can accumulate many real experiences and get a quick promotion in their career.
On the other hand, there are variety reasons why people tend to choose continue their education in university after graduating high school. First, they can obtain a large amount of basic and advance professional knowledge, which are essential for their career development. For example, most of the leaders in companies and organizations have a high degree. Furthermore, people who went to university are more likely to get a better job than who did not. For example, in current job market, student who graduate from engineer or doctor usually have more opportunities to choose the job and are highly paid.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against of going to university after high school and each of them has their own advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in recent years, going to university or no...
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Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... an important and widely debated issue. while some people maintain that we should get...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to continue'
Suggestion: to continue
...riety reasons why people tend to choose continue their education in university after gra...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93951612903 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6631194838 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584677419355 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6387374418 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2307692308 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0362285567279 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0158744824874 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027952761617 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.028374447386 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156216700523 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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