Modern era is a technical era.In education sector computer are prefer to provide education. Many people think that it is a positive development, but other consider it has negative results. I will discuss both the opinions in upcoming paragraphs.
Educating students with the help of computer, has many advantages in which first has time management.For large calculations many software applications are used rather than doing manually.Therefore computers play crucial role to work in minutes. Not only time is managed but the level of redundancy is also low. Secondly, distance education is provided through internet to pupils who can not travel every day to college to a long distance.As extra material is provided on internet.Thirdly, students will connect more with the technology by using various kinds of softwares and they will find more new advancements.
On the other hand, working on computers for a long time leads some diseases also such as poor vision and spine problem.It effects a lot on individual's health those work a lot on computer. Furthermore, it also effect on brain memory as every type of data is saved on computer so student do not bother about things to be remember. Moreover, their learning skills will be decreased as well as recreational activities. Pupil prefer to play online games instead of playing outdoor games such as Cricket, Football etcetera as these games are crucial for their physical growth.
To conclude, computer help in technical advancement but more use of it leads to some health issues
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1935483871 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00730769689 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633064516129 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7836549075 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.090909091 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175212862495 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697683873677 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588576860665 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12802235747 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598953706686 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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