Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Submitted by Ngân Hà on Tue, 01/14/2020 - 10:21

In my opinion, I agree with this statement. Nowadays, the world is developing with many technologies is invented. So there's no denying that computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years when today, most people use the computer to deal with their work.

The computers bring to people many advatages. First of all, it can help people to solve the problems in their work. If you have the computer which has internet access, you can search the information that you don't know. Besides, the computer can help you to present your report quality, caculates difficult number or keeps your important document as archives carefully with many useful apps such as Microsoft Powerpoint, Microsoft Excel or Google. Moreover, they can empowered people to conveniently keep in touch with friends and relatives. You can call and talk with your friends and your family freely without pay fees. Thirdly, the computer help you to relax after school time or work time with many intersing games. Specially, they can cultivate your knowledge with exciting informations.

Althought the computers have many advanteges, I think besides the computers, there are lost of invention that are very important for human life such as bulb or electric current. If the electric current wasn't found, the computer wouldn't run and invented for people.

Conclusions, I think the copmtures is one of the most important invention for human life. So we should use it for better ways and thanks to this invention

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, third, thirdly, i think, such as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08835341365 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61008338596 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570281124498 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2183126973 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301227050532 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998065658939 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621895799178 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176949973908 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630898492501 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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