There is a conflicting view among masses, they claim that the computer is the most significant creation of last century. I believe that the computer is Indubitably playing an indispensable role in numerous aspects.
To start with, there are abundant reasons to support this notion. In this modern time, computers are greatly assisting in several ways to every sector, or in other words, this has become the backbone of all developmental projects. First and foremost, every scientific study is being performed on the computer, without this, all research programs would be slow down and become complex for the researchers. Secondly, the medical industry is heavily relying on these computers whether it is composing reports or sending them to patients.
what is more, from transportation to tourism everything is relying on these computer devices, for example at present anyone can book a flight or hotel room anywhere in the world with the help of these computers Apart from this, there is a huge contribution of these electronic devices in the banking sector, without it keeping records will be a colossal problem for the accounts department likewise the past time where every single record had to be maintained manually.
The importance of computers in the field of education is unimaginable, for both graduates and professors for transferring study materials to each other by electronic mail or on the student's portal, and it also has huge random access memory to store the data. for example, in-country like Japan, Canada, Australia, the USA where the majority of colleges and universities follow the computer-based study and their tutors transfer all assignments and materials to student portals.
In conclusion, the invention of the computer is certainly advantageous, without it life could have been too complicated.
- Education is the single most important factor in development of a country Do you agree or disagree 96
- Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing for example through cellphone tracking are security cameras In many cases the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening 89
- Nowadays sport is becoming a big business with high earnings for professional sportspeople and a lot of companies have involved in financially and in other ways Is it a positive or negative development of sport 92
- Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers while others think that this is the role of parents Discuss both sides and give your opinion 92
- Some people believe that sport has an important role in society Others however feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...t it keeping records will be a colossal problems for the accounts department likewise th...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'accounts'' or 'account's'?
Suggestion: accounts'; account's
...rds will be a colossal problems for the accounts department likewise the past time where...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...or the accounts department likewise the past time where every single record had to mainta...
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...each other by electronic mail or on the students portal, and it is also has huge random ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...random access memory to store the data. for example, in country like japan, Canada,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in other words, to start with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39929328622 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91402696404 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625441696113 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.29110545 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.909090909 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16999224913 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618419095817 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258993130347 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823458373628 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254330629886 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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