Unlike before, computers are the good innovation to achieve every individuals aims and goals from this world. However, the notion of this may become attractive and renovated, furthermore, which is useful to the public as well. Hence, we all are living in computer era, so these components are constructive one.
To begin with, I completely agree this spectacular view. Although, every institutions or companies are using this technological gadget as a calendar at contemporary. Moreover, it will give good informations to gather in an exact scenario, for the guidance and developing our knowledge. Furthermore, this is the advanced technology which, we are instructed for any kinds of hassles, menaces to overcome that. Inspite of, the fashionable trends and modernized curricular activities regulated at conspicous manner, indeed, it should be needed for our educational strategies like projects, researches and job prosperities as well. To be specific, when I was studying post basic bsc nursing, whilst doing research my computer was shut off my data's totally ignored, instead of saving and even I suffered a lot on this.
Evidently, computer is a big electronic device, which is invented by Charles Babbage. From engineers to doctors, students, teachers, government organization they all use computers to perform specific tasks for entertainment or just to finish office work. In many countries, whenever students going to schools they should carry the computers for study purposes and practical purposes too. In a computer systems software includes the programmes that are dedicated to managing the computer itself, such as the operating system, file management utilities and disk operating system. In addition to that, some of the hardware application also there for a good operation.
To sum up, without computer we can't live in this world, owing to that the technology as developed a lot. Whenever, we will use any electronic devices and their functions are activated by the computers. So, computers are our life not only at present in the future too.
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime, others however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishmen 84
- Some people say that education system is the only critical factor to development of a country To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Nowadays, people are get married and have their children after the age of 30. is it a positive or negative development? Give your own example based on your experience? 50
- The map below is of the town of Canterbury A new school s is planned for the area The map shows two possible sites for the school 69
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 579, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt utilities and disk operating system. In addition to that, some of the hardware ...
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... operating system. In addition to that, some of the hardware application also there for a g...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tion. To sum up, without computer we cant live in this world, owing to that the t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38580246914 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01313457338 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0748027255 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.647058824 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131079967638 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421929380203 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318733992439 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084499831762 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193721766812 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.