Considering the problems of pollution and traffic jams,some people at Gue cars should be banned from the centre of the city discuss advantages and disadvantages of it and actions taken to solve the problems
Nowadays, traffic jam is one of major cause of increase rate of pollution in big cities however some individuals accord that car should be avoided to enter main parts of the town.I will discuss both merits and demerits as well as solutions to solve this problem in upcoming paragraphs
To embark with, there are certain benefits of banning car in the main parts of the big cities.First and foramost most people prefer other transport like metro train and local buses which lead to rise in income of government.secondly,as cars are avoided in big cities so pollution is declined in a city and have clean environmental. Lastly individuals can travel comfortably in cheaper price through metro
On the other hand there are many disadvantages of banning of cars in main part of the town. Fristly individuals think that car is fastest means of travel in city which however save time and made them more efficient.At the last people have not any difficulty in travelling to any market or place. In addition it also affects the market growth which lead to decline rate of development in new companies in the cities
Moving further government should have strict rule against individuals who break the rule moreover provide good parking features in other and every market.Lastly make flyover to avoid traffic jam in the city
In conclusion, governments should use even odd policy to decline rate of traffic jam and to control pollutants of the city
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96280991736 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84866634384 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582644628099 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 184.943741446 49.4020404114 374% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 300.25 106.682146367 281% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.5 20.7667163134 291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.25 7.06120827912 457% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262887498067 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135601096994 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715206736778 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144640836285 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639295268243 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 13.0946893788 246% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 50.2224549098 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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