Undoubtedly, advertisements become an integral part of our life . Nowadays , society are flooded with advertisement and most of the people have great impact of it . I, firmly believe that above statement is true . This essay will going to discuss the domination of flyer and what steps should ensure to halt this trend.
First and foremost , influence is abundant use of overseas products. To extend it, masses become aware about dominos, adidas, apple with the advent of sophisticated bulletins. Consequently, habits of people using these commodities shows that they have under the pressure of advertisements. Furthermore, recent consumer have knowledge about what is in trend and what is out of fashion as compared to yesteryears buyers. To clarify it, is burgeoning business in every field. An optimal example , with the help of promotion masses start their business online to offers them shopping with comfort at their home . As a result, society used to complete their work without disruptive their schedule.
Probing towards solutions, firstly onus should be on the shoulder of government to regulate the advertisement which is detrimental to community such as display regarding smoking should be ban to not to persuade more among masses. Eventually , consumers become lagging behind to use them . Moreover, advertisement agencies must keep an eye on aim of the bulletin so its repercussion would not be spread in between people . For instance, promotion would not target their ads concerning to children such as junk food so they become escape from health problems .So, health of the children should not at stake and promotional supervisor present them in welfare of society.
In conclusion, although, leaflets have umpteen benefits ,but its drawbacks should not be undermined. If, authorities adequately guides the companies to unveil it in favor of humankind . So, that its black lash removed.
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- The natural resources such as oil forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate What problems does it cause How can we solve these problems 56
- It is impossible to help all people in the world so governments should only focus on people in their own countries To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
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- Some people think that parents should limit the time their children spend watching TV and playing computer games and encourage them to read books instead Do you agree or disagree with this point of view 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35906040268 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95004366352 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644295302013 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.1666666667 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178768499646 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477210309054 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442434307432 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944747660377 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335477270909 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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