It is irrefutable that ,renewable resources like oil, woods and water are used at an unprecedent and rate . This essay will going to discuss major stumbling block and how to mitigate this issue.
To commence , predominant hazard of accelerated use of materials is one day earth would be ended up and looking as barren , no resources will find in future and it would be awful to existence of upcoming generations . What is more, it would not only detrimental to humans but also, menace to various species survived like animals, birds, aquatic animals and wildlife genetics . To epitomize , if vehemently utilization of resources would not ended up then what other species drink, how they managed their food and without shelter where they live . Therefore, it would exacerbate the condition of entire planet.
Measures should be taken prudently , government would work beyond the conventional domain and set some restrictions and regulations in consumption of resources such as authorities must given punishment or penalize to who use it extensively . Moreover, another paramount steps that we would strive hard to sway the population of world which is the prime factor of burgeoning this issue and that only be halt when adequate planning of family program organized and raise awareness among people . As a consequent, overdependence on resources would be lessens and perseverance of environment has taken place .
To wrap up , although usage of renewable resources is never undermined and it is ubiquitous , but, with judicious used problem can be alleviated .
- Computers are increasingly used in education In which areas do you think are computers more important and in which areas are teachers more important 84
- Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements What measures can be taken to protect them 84
- Some people think that parents should limit the time their children spend watching TV and playing computer games and encourage them to read books instead Do you agree or disagree with this point of view 89
- Some people believe that they have right to keep all their earnings and can neglect taxes Do you agree or disagree with this 78
- The line graph below shows the number of birds of different types sighted at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary between 2001 and 2014 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30081300813 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99228791767 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674796747967 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.775804325 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.4 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185303817727 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703681112612 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600216171165 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115251012612 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364265058123 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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