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Grammar and spelling errors:
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It is irrefutable that ,renewable resources like oil, woods and ...
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...ater are used at an unprecedent and rate . This essay will going to discuss major ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
... unprecedent and rate . This essay will going to discuss major stumbling block and h...
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...l going to discuss major stumbling block and how to mitigate this issue. To comm...
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...how to mitigate this issue. To commence , predominant hazard of accelerated use o...
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... would be ended up and looking as barren , no resources will find in future and it...
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...ful to existence of upcoming generations . What is more, it would not only detrime...
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...s, aquatic animals and wildlife genetics . To epitomize , if vehemently utilizat...
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...als and wildlife genetics . To epitomize , if vehemently utilization of resource...
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...nd wildlife genetics . To epitomize , if vehemently utilization of resources wou...
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...genetics . To epitomize , if vehemently utilization of resources would not ended...
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Suggestion: end
...tly utilization of resources would not ended up then what other species drink, how ...
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...lization of resources would not ended up then what other species drink, how they ...
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...food and without shelter where they live . Therefore, it would exacerbate the cond...
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...e condition of entire planet. Measures should be taken prudently , government w...
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...t. Measures should be taken prudently , government would work beyond the conven...
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Message: Did you mean 'have given' or 'give'?
Suggestion: have given; give
...n of resources such as authorities must given punishment or penalize to who use it ex...
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...nt or penalize to who use it extensively . Moreover, another paramount steps that ...
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...ganized and raise awareness among people . As a consequent, overdependence on reso...
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...ources would be lessens and perseverance of environment has taken place . To wr...
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...verance of environment has taken place . To wrap up , although usage of renewa...
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...vironment has taken place . To wrap up , although usage of renewable resources i...
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...is never undermined and it is ubiquitous , but, with judicious used problem can be...
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...judicious used problem can be alleviated .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30081300813 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99228791767 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674796747967 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.775804325 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.4 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185303817727 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703681112612 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600216171165 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115251012612 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364265058123 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.