Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from
competing companies.
To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisement ? What
measures can be taken to protect them ?
Customers are challenged with elevating expenditure of commercials from enhancing companies. There are several reasons behind this issue; However, certain steps can be tackle to curb this issue.
Discussing the reasons behind number of advertisement issue, the foremost one is that buyers confuse about buying a particular product. To justify, by seeing it they have a plethora of choices to select only one. In addition to this, Consumers feel distracting by internet advertisements. For instance, someone is working on internet and one pop-up message came to the page of worker. Furthermore, it assists children to buy unhealthy food rather than eating a healthy diet such as fast foods. These age groups get mesmerized by the commercials and push their parents to buy.
However, certain steps can be taken into consideration on individualistic basis. The most impactful one is that never provide personal information such as e-mail address and contact number. The buyers must be given knowledge about quality standardization makers, safety instructions and other legal aspects. The buyers also should be vigilant when purchasing goods. To elaborate, companies will not be able to contact with you in any case. Another beneficial remedy is that block to the certain website as they cannot distract while you are working on internet.
To conclude, it can be finally said that it is undeniable that increasing number of advertisement may have bad influences for buyers as they feel confusing as well as distracting by it. Henceforth, I believe this debate must be considered on serious notes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y instructions and other legal aspects. The buyers also should be vigilant when pur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34126984127 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98531933288 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4094454898 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.125 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181586803221 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510916683104 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473229619539 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105655232369 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390164676614 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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