The study raise in population is no doubt one of the most hazardous problem faced in the recent times, however in my opinion there are far more important problems that need our immediate attention, in the following essay i would elaborate my point of view with relevant examples.
To begin with, the surge in human population can be attributed to the rapid advancement in the medical care, moreover the contemporary research on medical field has a pivotal impact over the well know and potentially life threatening diseases, for instance vaccination of small pox was revolutionary, this disease had the most death rates back in 16th to 18th century, after the introduction of its vaccine in early 19th century, this disease was completely eradicated. Further more lack of education on population growth has a huge impact on the public, in developing countries people breed more, and have 2-3 children on average contributing to the population growth.
In my belief, raise in population is no doubt one of the biggest catastrophe human kind is facing, but there are far more immediate problems that need our attentions, such as global warming. The study raise of our planets temperature is having its toll, it is not only effecting the humans but also animals, raise in sea level can be a major problem for all the breeds of living creatures on this plant, raise in human population maybe adding up to this issue, for example deforestation plays a major role in contributing to global warming, need for more land people venture to the forest and cut down the tress, these tress are the main source of filtration of co2 gas we emit, contributing to the over all raise in temperature.
To sum up, population raise maybe a major problem but there is little that can be done about it, moreover we should try to mitigate the consequences of the problem in hand such as global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89408099688 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77068085361 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548286604361 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.330166235 49.4020404114 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.833333333 106.682146367 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.5 20.7667163134 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.3333333333 7.06120827912 316% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149306485676 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799411168044 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261379143821 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944011827485 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185318177437 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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