The continued rise in world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
There is no doubt that the world's population is significantly increasing day by day . It is said to be the greatest problem encountered by humans today .This is primarily because advances made in medical science and life expectancy. From my own perspective, overpopulation can be accounted as the biggest issue that individuals all over the globe are facing .
There are various factors contribute to the booming population .Advancement in medical science had declined the mortality rate and has risen the birth rate .That is to say, it provides the effective ways to protect people from child mortality, epidemics as well as deadly diseases. In addition, modern medicine also has led to a growth in the global average life expectancy.By this I mean , with the help of the today's modern medicine people can easily avoid some deadly illnesses. During the Covid - 19 period , for example, scientists and doctors worked on creating vaccines against this infection .As a result, lots of people did not suffer from this illness.
It goes without saying that ,overpopulation may harm the balance between needs and resources of people. For instance, when a country is overwhelmed by population, it intensifies the unemployment crisis as there may be fewer job opportunities to provide the large amount of population. Moreover, the increasing population will harm the environment severely, that is to say, the more people , the more need for vehicles and industries .This can impact the quality of air negatively as CO2 emmisions will be risen.
To conclude, most people, including me, consider the overpopulation as the biggest issue in the globe because of the severe problems behind it like climate change and unemployment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0199792327 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5532177286 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.1 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10966930786 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423090354996 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484952495546 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683316265883 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620627182265 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.