Convenience food will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what degree do you agree or disagree?
The growth of processed food is estimated as it is range of availability being transferred into brand-new likewise, advertisement, size and odor, with abolishing traditional cuisine and preparation style. The way of my thinking, ready meal has already taken its possesion in our daily life which offers distinctive flavor in each type.
The one proper justification is that the followers consider ready-made foods as easy to afford in any markets. At the current time, manufacturers this type of foods experienced a speedy increase under the name MC Donald's, Simple, Big Burger, Red Pizza and so on. On the other hand, they proffer services namely, delivering to your residential area and guarante making preparation in simple way which is every member of your family can do it and tucks in with pleasure. Moreover, it is also facilely digested albeit in the midnight.
Another illustration reason for growing up the percentage of demanders for convenience food is the decline of family size suchlike, in the past people tend to live in large numbers in a family. Nonetheless, it became alternative living, as well as people prefer dwell in nuclear and single parent families which need not any traditional culinarian process and foods. Besides that the ingredients are bought for homemade will be spoiled in a few days until using, howbeit, in readymade one you order in for yourself adequately which will not be stale. This is also commercial way to solve the problem.
I would like to conclude with my prospective nowadays, ready meals facilitate to reduce in our daily chores with outweighing its disadvantage and sooner or later traditional meals will be misplaced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ffers distinctive flavor in each type. The one proper justification is that the fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, likewise, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15441176471 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93510402544 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658088235294 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6050756201 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165972504563 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521426794384 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414012136883 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896419084036 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204015906068 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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