It is certainly the case that fast foods is having high dominance over customary foods everyone eats nowadays, for access of food is no longer following the ordinary ways generally, newer ways of food production and preparation becomes the trend which is prevailing to be an instant and easy way.
As understood easy availability of convenient foods in the market brings favourable effects for both teengaers and adults who are ongoing through a hectic schedule in life. A high number of youngsters keen on to worldwide branching of famous food chains like McDonalds’, KFC and so on has become immense. They are now spotted in almost every important locality of city. Thus, the popularity of consumers raised the trend of these stores which is viewed to be an indispensable part in teenagers’ eyes.
As you can see, not until the foods are readily accessible for people to look for, it wouldn’t stand a chance of rise in food stores’ earnings which is vital for foods to maintain proper processing as that in the past, yet, foods access has to meet the present needs and standards to be headed compared to the past. Food chains are likely to earn extra profits significantly, which is considered to be successful without stagnant for both workers and the company.
In conclusion, fast foods stores are conducive to society as a whole, both consumers and stores themselves are seen equally favourable. Undeniably, the old ways in food processing will never be seen in present market.
- Families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. Discuss the effects lack of experience with and understanding of nature can have on children as they grow up. 56
- By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty for committing murder therefore life in prison is better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example 61
- The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton Park and a plan for proposed changes. 78
- As compared to the past children these days spend more of their leisure time indoors with computers and TV and less time outdoors Describe some of the problems this lack of outdoor leisure time can cause and suggest at least one possible solution 65
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.056 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92574776767 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6845930331 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.444444444 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22138290194 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909190498102 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606043632231 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145400532537 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324747121414 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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