Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We are living in a fast-paced world and along with this is the prevalence of convenience foods. After pondering the pros and cons of that convenience will eventually replace traditional foods and methods of food preparation, I strongly agree with this opinion.
First and foremost, we are getting busier and busier than we used to be in the past. Having loads of work makes people feel exhausted after a hard-working day. Tired of working causes us have no more energy to prepare traditional food. Therefore, we may look for convenience foods. Using this kind of food saves us a significant of time. Thus, we can spend more time on relaxing and refreshing, which is more comfortable than busily preparing traditional foods in the kitchen for hours.
Another compelling reason is that when we use convenience foods we can hardly get any leftovers, which leads to easy cleaning the kitchen. We only eat just enough amount of convenience foods (sausages, canned soup or bread) when we need. Hence, neither we have any leftovers after eating nor we are tired from cleaning the dirty kitchen which full of garbage everyday.
In conclusion, the popularity of convenience foods has replaced traditional foods and methods of food preparation. From my point of view, the advantages of this kind of food outweigh its disadvantages
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05479452055 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83969074717 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8759424381 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1538461538 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319140380499 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138874787447 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165226801327 0.0667982634062 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255828766677 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145729101685 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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