When discussing about who should be responsible for covering all medical costs for diagnosing and treating diseases, it is often believed that the government should shoulder these expenditures. In this essay, I would like to examine this viewpoint and provide my personal conclusion.
To begin with, it is a matter of fact that in many countries, especially developing countries like Vietnam, poor people are often prevented from going to or staying in the hospitals for medical treatment because they can not afford it. As a result, if the government offered a free healthcare system, it could certainly give an equal opportunity for every citizens to be diagnosed and treated many illnesses especially serious diseases such as lung, throat or liver cancer and heart- related diseases. Secondly, it is also true that, the welfare state for free public services health could encourage every people to have regular medical check- ups to protect them from being suffer deadly diseases. Therefore, many lives of them would be either saved or lengthened significantly.
However, it should also be borne in mind that, in our society, there are a lot of well-off people who can certainly afford their healthcare costs. Secondly, it it undeniable that many governments around the world are experiencing tremendous financial difficulties and thus cannot spend more funding on providing free healthcare services to their citizens. As a result, a free health care system, would be a financial impractical policy that would cause governments to waste a lot of money.
In conclusion, I personally believe that although the government should not be responsible for paying all healthcare costs for their citizens, the poor who cannot afford these costs by themselves should still receive assistance from their authority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37894736842 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85988374885 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575438596491 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5324304737 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.3 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239934811722 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889834114462 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737177584826 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152466608971 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366022708377 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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