Overseas tourism is rapidly growing as part of the survey which is given by the International tourism. They mentioned the list of positive impacts that are displayed in the record is the significant growth of tourism. Among that, cost reduction is the most predominant one and impulsing people invade different countries as temporary immigrants. This essay explains the benefits and consequences of increasing overseas travel in diverse countries.
To start with, tourism has plenty of benefits that gaining the countries immensely. The most significant advantage is creating employment opportunities for local people. As a result, the country could culminate the point of an economy level higher. Moreover, the country's popular attractions such as museums, monuments are becoming exhibitions to make tourists pay and visit. To exemplify, a recent article unveiled the economy report of China is 92.7%, out of that 60% of the revenue they are earning from tourists.
On the flip side, although tourism contains abundant benefits, some cons which cause the environment, the tension between governments and also incautious about the culture and tradition of the destination country. As a matter of fact, some people do not have an awareness of how other nations follow the attire and public regulations. Some tourists attempt crimes in order to solve their financial crisis. For instance, last year in the USA, the tourists killed 35-year-old lay to pay the ticket price to return to his home country. This creates tension between governments.
To sum up the advantages and drawbacks of proliferating tourism in other countries, I strongly believe that experiencing and exploring the places overseas would devote abundant benefits of one nation's economic growth. Whilst, some people who are incautious about the destination regulations and environment would certainly ruin the reputation of the nation undoubtedly. Thereby, the government has to impose the law against the tourists to make them precautious about the other nation's law system prior to their travel would be the best awareness in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one nation', 'a nation', or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: one nation; a nation; nations
...rseas would devote abundant benefits of one nations economic growth. Whilst, some people wh...
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Line 7, column 479, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...o make them precautious about the other nations law system prior to their travel would ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, as to, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46483180428 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89788553204 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590214067278 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4539295794 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.117647059 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166436044209 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490294281095 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063005983585 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102184446025 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839887796295 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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