Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for yuor answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Write at least 250 words
Nowaday contries has greatest similarity, due to globalitation. Consequently, people can have the same items all over the world, use the same technologies, construct indistinguisable building and branches of international companies that are selling identical products practically in every contries. I am alguays thinking in this global situation and it has advantages and disadvantages, although from my perspective it is highly desirable for several reasons.
To start, some of the beneficial part is that everyone can purchase the most popular branded artiche from their city and even on internet by international online shopping page such as Amazon and Ebay which is positive because everybody can acquire whatever they wish easily. Moreover, international branches provides employment, pay taxes and help to rase country's economy.
However, this days international free trades is allowed in most contries, therefore, tough competition is everywhere which many people find as an obstacle specialy in developing countries; for example Paraguay, my native land, there is a namber of corporation that have been trying to introduce new products made by local industries to attract more clients, even though they had not achived might have because because of quality; while international articles usually have excellent feature, the local one rarely can achive the standard either for poor-quality material or marketing shortage.
To conclude: globalization and similar way to live have made life far luxurious and comfortable in many aspect, dispite some problems in poor countries. So, I hope this phenomenon is likely to continues improving and the negative part solved
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the greatest'.
Suggestion: has the greatest
Nowaday contries has greatest similarity, due to globalitation. Conse...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rable for several reasons. To start, some of the beneficial part is that everyone can pu...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: because
... though they had not achived might have because because of quality; while international article...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...e life far luxurious and comfortable in many aspect, dispite some problems in poor countrie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69322709163 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12517233378 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701195219124 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.954681082 49.4020404114 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.625 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162750770801 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559655316008 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375409293723 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851203817589 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338727265845 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.63 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.09 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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