As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
It is irrefutable that car is a comfortable mode of transport as compared to other public transport and it provides flexible service. With the development of country, people are buying more cars and some people consider that cars are indispensable and worthwhile. Although there are certain advantages associated with this trend, the downsides in this case seem to outweigh the upsides.
It goes without saying that it is prominent mode at the time of emergency. For example, if people face any health problem then this mode of transport provides service immediately rather than other modes. Apart from that, in bygone time, people spent a lot of time to wait for the bus but now they save lot of time by using their own cars. On the other hand, nowadays by development of country, banks are rendering the service of car's loan and manufacturers provide installment service, that's the reason, people afford car easily.
Despite these advantages, however, it is catastrophic for our environment. Moreover people will have to endure tremendous effects. With more cars, pollution will burgeon and toxic winds can create big problems for people's health. What is more, parking problems have also to combat by people, while by this many occurrence have been happened.
In conclusion, although some people highlight the advantages of this, I believe its disadvantages more than their advantages, if everyone will have their own car then pollution will be soared and it creates innumerable effects on our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ufacturers provide installment service, thats the reason, people afford car easily. ...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...it is catastrophic for our environment. Moreover people will have to endure tremendous e...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occurrence seems to be countable; consider using: 'many occurrences'.
Suggestion: many occurrences
...also to combat by people, while by this many occurrence have been happened. In conclusion, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19262295082 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76984605434 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598360655738 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6594600829 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286458055916 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925444221295 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701525760994 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163416943885 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174239205685 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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