Creative activities of artists generally represent the cultural identification of a nation. While i agree that composers ought to be granted to put forward their ideas clearly and firmly through drawings, screenplays and melodies, i also believe that regimes need to impose legal restraints on specific aspects which could spark serious unrests. This essay will support my opinion with relevant examples.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 328 350
No. of Characters: 1868 1500
No. of Different Words: 236 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.256 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.695 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.889 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 129 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 87 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.789 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.504 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.002 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tural identification of a nation. While i agree that composers ought to be grante...
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Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nplays and melodies, i also believe that regimes need to impose legal restraints ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, to begin with, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82926829268 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96108008013 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713414634146 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6853841275 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.571428571 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13943483974 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400735369557 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400622416805 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873967099856 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370852907806 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.83 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.