Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own idea (in words, picture, music or films) in whichever they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
The issue of freedom of artists has extremely grown in importance in most countries over the last few decades. Some residents advocate for the willingness of artists to create tremendous concepts whereas others agree that there ought to be limitations on their work. From my perspective, a number of certain areas need to be controlled by some restrictions.
To begin with, regulation is needed in order to minimize the opportunities to meet offensive contents. Given that people, especially children have not had full awareness of the phenomenon surrounding them, they are likely to be influenced by those repugnant ideas and follow inappropriate demeanor. For instance, a song called Gloomy Sunday caused the depression or even suicide to some listeners, consequently it was banned globally.
Furthermore, art concepts can create misinterpretation due to the lack of control of the government. Even though inaccurate information may appear without intention, it still leads to tension between people or even between nations. To illustrate this, the North Korean administration complained about a successful drama from South Korea indicating the implicit lifestyle of citizens there.
By contrast, it is undeniable that limitations prevent artists from exploiting their potential talent. They are afraid of truly expressing their opinion or utilizing their creativity to avoid facing controls as well as punishments from the government. Additionally, restrictions also extract the chances to enhance national culture. Only when the individual's authenticity exists does it create diversity.
In conclusion, it is no exaggeration to assert that the government should implement a number of regulations to ensure the quality of art works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, still, then, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70498084291 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23203638874 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681992337165 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.597254504 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178692542021 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475967012057 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045968994215 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843542604283 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390511709693 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.