Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
In recent decades, preventing crime has been receiving a great deal of people's attention around the world due to its substantial impacts on society. Although it would be argued that there has no method can be applied to prevent crime, I believe there are some resolutions which can be done by both of governments and societies to resolve the offence problem.
There are some methods that the government could take steps to alleviate the crime problem.
First, by applying obligated law subject on curriculum at the middle-year school, juveniles have gained more knowledge about not only kinds of crime but also punishment for that criminal. For example, in my country, the sixth grade students are learning a subject related to the law that will help them separate either good action or bad action at the early stage of their life.
Second, In order for potential criminal to give up sinful thought, the governments need to harden sanctions. For instance, custody judge need to be applied for all criminal replaced to be not in jail punishment, which will wipe out not only organized criminal but also pretty crime.
There also have more effective resolutions that can be done by societies to act as deterrent for increasing offender.
First, If potential children, such as those who has divorced parent and orphan, are received correctly supports, they are less chance to join in sinful route. For instant, In Vietnam there are more than 80 percent of criminal who lived a dysfunctional family, the big amount of offence will be remove when having the suitable help to the children.
Second, since those who have criminal record at the young age are support to rehabilitation by lenient societies that ensure the juveniles do not involve crime. In fact, the juveniles are supported to find a suitable job to make a living, which make them be responsible for the life rather than spending time on sinful thought.
In conclusion, I believe that there are numerous resolutions could be done by both the governments and the societies to prevent crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 206, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'percents'?
Suggestion: percents
...tant, In Vietnam there are more than 80 percent of criminal who lived a dysfunctional f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01749271137 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65688699905 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542274052478 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.9195009453 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.384615385 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186651660172 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731734080412 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705954374586 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978391279532 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076029699365 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.