The prime concern currently bothering many nations is crime. Various aspects of society are being hit by unlawful acts conducted by some individuals and organizations. While some people think that there is no solution to end this, I believe judiciary systems has all the power to minimize crime.
To begin with, majority of countries classify crimes in to different segments and each of it has a certain level of severity in punishment. But, I think that each crime should be considered seriously: More and more draconian punishments such as death penalty or lifetime imprisonment should be implemented. For instance, UAE already has strict laws about many misdemeanors. As a result, crime rate has come down to a negligible amount. This sets an example to many other nations for controlling crime.
On the other hand, the causes of crime should be investigated and governments should take strict initiatives to prevent them during their inception. For instance, gun crime is too high in the USA and the prime reason is the easy access to armory. By making it tough to attain such weapons, many sociopaths and evil entities can be stopped from planning any life-threatening acts. Moreover, the production of ammunition should be governed and limited if needed on a regular basis. In fact, United Nations Organization must intervene in such society-benefitting initiatives.
In a nutshell, I think that evil can be ceased by strictly imposing various laws and only legal system of any nation has that power. Though they may seem harsh, such activities can enhance the welfare of many communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, i think, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18076923077 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00692248657 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626923076923 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9731203659 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164183810412 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539295103138 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024595206898 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101042017697 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00810105152868 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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