Irrefutably, in this globalised era, tremendous advancment is manifested in all the arenas, owing to technology. Technology is improve to deduct crime rate in all arena and near future it's will be make completely easy.I absolutely agree with this notion. This essay would shed light on valid points in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, the main provoking factor according to the notion is that in future human will can easily search any crime owing to the edvancment. People will can use the high quality camera in all area like city, street area, rural area. Researcher will prevent the new gadget, which help to find crime.Now days, some places where crime rate being reduce slightly but another a few places also like where researcher uses high level of technology for example in laboratory scientist uses different type of chemicals which helps to find culprit's crime.
Moving further, according the rubric, in modera era urban area crime is falled already but in rural area same amount of crime rate is seeing same as in past, but owing to improvement in technology after few years in future rural area will be make a crimeless. In future scientists will use the new satelite program, which aid to deduct the crime rate and provide more facilities according to the latest technology.
In the final reckoning, this essay tend to reiterate that everything will be changed in future and prevent the new facilities and new protection, which human can not thinking in their mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...nas, owing to technology. Technology is improve to deduct crime rate in all arena and n...
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Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...crime rate in all arena and near future its will be make completely easy.I absolute...
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Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...future its will be make completely easy.I absolutely agree with this notion. This...
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Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Now
...he new gadget, which help to find crime.Now days, some places where crime rate bein...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... amount of crime rate is seeing same as in past, but owing to improvement in technology...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...years in future rural area will be make a crimeless. In future scientists will use the new ...
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Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...and new protection, which human can not thinking in their mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01612903226 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56211847747 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556451612903 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9946611354 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.222222222 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277150604075 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109082135389 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814448382394 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161344019561 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065962963066 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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