Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem

Nowadays, there is a global upsurge in the rejuvenation of criminals, particularly in major cities. This phenomenon can be attributed to a myriad of factors and poses a formidable challenge. This essay will delve into the root causes and propose viable solutions to tackle this pressing issue.

There are three primary factors worth highlighting. Firstly, the socioeconomic status plays a pivotal role in the surge of youth-related crimes. The gaping disparity between the affluent and underprivileged, coupled with limited access to quality education and diminished economic prospects, contributes significantly to the rise in youth crime as a means of survival. Secondly, family-related issues can propel young individuals towards criminal activities. Instances of domestic violence, parental neglect, and inadequate guidance can leave adolescents adrift, making them susceptible to criminal behavior. Consequently, they may stray from the path of lawfulness. Thirdly, the abuse of addictive substances among teenagers can be a catalyst for criminal activities. Research has shown that such substances can erode both mental and physical well-being, driving young individuals to commit crimes in pursuit of satisfying their cravings.

To mitigate this predicament, a multifaceted approach is imperative. Firstly, investing in education and skill development is paramount. Enhancing the quality of education and vocational training programs equips young people with the skills needed to secure gainful employment and build a promising future. Another crucial solution involves fostering collaboration between families, schools, and the broader society. By receiving adequate care and attention from these stakeholders, young people are more likely to recognize their mistakes early, correct them, and develop a more wholesome perspective.

In conclusion, the escalation of youth-related crimes in urban areas worldwide is a multifaceted issue fueled by various factors. Addressing this problem necessitates a comprehensive and concerted effort, encompassing education, family support, and community engagement. It is imperative that society collectively works towards the goal of curbing this alarming trend and providing young individuals with the opportunities and guidance they need to choose lawful and productive paths in life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13333333333 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25054208942 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657575757576 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9604702597 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.526315789 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159539647703 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379689257473 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343365889264 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913444108302 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223338198628 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.98 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.51 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 78.4519038076 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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