Currently, there are a lot of environmental problems. Most of these problems arise due to people's lifestyle, that is
Currently, there are a lot of environmental problems. most of these problems arise due to people's lifestyle, that is, he solution to problems is hidden in our lifestyle and behavior. For example, when going to the store, a consumer can take a bag with him, do not throw away plastic bottles or insure that all lights are off.
The ecological footprint is the result of the actions and lifestyle of people. For example, many people do not recycle waste, which causes accumulation of garbage. also, despite the fact that a lot of various economical light bulbs are available now, a lot of people still use ordinary ones that require more electricity. another major factor in this phenomenon is overpopulation, that is, the more people, the more needs and resources are used. As a result of these actions, all natural sources are depleted and used simply.
However, like all problems, this problem also has solutions. For example, to reduce the exhaust emissions into the atmosphere, you can shorten the period of use of cars. that is, one day of the week can be declared a non-car day, only public transports and bicycles can operate on these days, or switching to electric cars can be another solution. it’s also no secret that plastic bottles and silicone bags are among the products that slowly decompose. The rejection of such products would significantly improve the environment, and paper bags can be used instead. But it is worth noting that this solution leads to another problem-deforestation. Therefore, it would be appropriate to start recycling paper and use it as bags.
In conclusion, I believe that most natural problems arise due to wrong lifestyle. Changing people's lifestyle, behavior, aptitude and attitude can easily solve many environmental problems
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- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12714776632 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93389495971 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0048753869 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7647058824 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309209738346 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106547489242 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142778381922 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232032819854 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152861763967 0.056905535591 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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