Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine.
However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Developing technology influnces on the life style of a large group of people, but there are another group who believe on traditional solutions in some problems. they think traditional medicine -using of some natural planets or glosseries- is better than modern medicine like doing serguery and chemistrical drugs. In contrast, the first group believe that tradional medicine can hurt the body and may being dangerious. In this essay, I would arque that I am agree with traditional medicine and give some causes and instances about my opinion.
At first, I believe that every diaseas that human beings are being faced to, has a solution to health from planet or nature. For example, HIV is the most important and treatfull dease among people, but we can defend by eating some fruits like banana. Secondly, almost all kind of drugs produce by sources that be exploit from earth and organic bins, fruits vegetables and nature glossories. On the other hand, traditional medicine is cheaper than modern medicine. I am convinced that the chemistrical drugs have a lot of negative affects on the patient's body. A good illustration of this is drugs that produce from codeine. this kind of drugs is dangerious because patient may be faced to adiction and wide harmfull damages apeears in the feature.
finally, it is clear that doctors guide simple patients to the hospitals for doing surgeury, take the health cares, and rest even they dont need to especial cares. I can named this social event on "Money Game".
To summarise, I am agree with traditional medicine by doing sport, using fresh vegetarian and planets. we can see this when look at to the society and the other relevant evidences among people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
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Suggestion: agreed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in contrast, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02816901408 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62838374498 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5114680621 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151760519889 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049696652254 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346114506469 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927469452857 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252854303341 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.