Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dongerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dongerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement

Nowadays, Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dongerous. In this essay, I completly agree if there are gives more benefit rather than benefit. for several reasons
it is important that evaluasi alternative medicine related Drug Utilization Resourh (DUR) to reached a hight drug qualitify.Guedilines which supported by strong edivence is needed as recommendation on drugs prescribing. firtsly, alternative medicine such as herb water. people being trusted its great for healty , but doe to used that disavailable. beside that, some population ages included utilization cure on children, pregnant mother, and oldster is sensitive to used drugs without direcly used trustworthy. its dangerous to survival. secondly, ability people to used and knowlage ingredience and instrument very doubly in some cases dont have Lisence
on the other hands, many society prefer to used alternatife medicine because outaly is cheap and can help midle society or poor society to saved money. than story of decent alternatife medicine effect to older people life for a long time. in conclusion, i hope society should check chemical ingrediets in related institution and consultation in doctor.
To sum up, ftom where I stand it is already its give more disadvantanges rather tan advantanges. I bealived alternatif metodh its dongarous, but for the future alternative medicine should cooperation with public healty office be better healing.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52118644068 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10076347147 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690677966102 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4324916773 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24427288496 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938005587038 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159782220152 0.0667982634062 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169787260716 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218935619809 0.056905535591 385% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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