It is argued that riding bike brings about a variety of benefits, but there is still an uncommon picture in the modern world. This essay will discuss why does it come to this phenomenon and then address the question of how can improve its popularity.
The principal reasons for that cycling is not often seen are its inconvenience and danger. It is clear that it takes longer to go to work or somewhere instead of cars or motorbikes and people can have to cope with hazardous circumstances that can easily damage seriously. In cities, traffic roads and considerable amount of time make it impractical to expect cycling. For example, parents cannot allow their kids to ride a bike to school due to the dangerous transport and they do not have enough time to cycle to work too.
Despite the fact that there are uncommon cases like that, government is considered to be a vital role to increase this popularity. Not only by encouraging everyone to cycle through many campaigns, but also impose tax on the use of other private transports can promote the use of bicycles. If conducting monthly green days, the awareness will certainly be risen and this habit gradually becomes a necessary thing in life at all. Moreover, congestion charges or high tax being ruled, car owners or motorists definitely use them rarely.
In conclusion, regardless of bike’s positive impacts on the environment, it is still uncommon in many places recently. However, it can be changed thanks to the government’s immediate actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...owners or motorists definitely use them rarely. In conclusion, regardless of bike’s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97244094488 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78605833109 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649606299213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2844052166 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130890532621 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420047476757 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476779890361 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722439544741 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110025021979 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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