Food has always been a major concern since it is one of the human's indispensable need. The global population growth along with the rising income in developing countries are driving up global food demand. Governments serve an important function in meeting this demand0
The first possible cause of an ever- increasing demand for food could be the tremendously rising population of the world. Actually, over the last century, the global population has quadrupled. Consequently, the more the population grow, the more food is needed. Moreover, people are surrounded by a wide range of advertisements which encourage them to buy products even when they really do not need them. These advertisements develop a consumerist culture that people want more than they actually need. For example, when people go to restaurants, they order a meal which they cannot eat all of it and a big portion of that will be thrown away as a waste.
However, to keep up with this increasing demand for food governments should make essential attempts. Not only should government increase the area under cultivation but also should improve farming techniques by allocating certain educational programs for the farmers. Government can hold some seminars to educate farmers about modern and safe fertilizers to use on farmland or the watering systems which let them grow more products.
In conclusion, although the need for food is on the rise because of over population and food loss, government is able to meet this desire by allocating more area to be cultivated or educating farmers to use new agricultural systems and materials.
- Demand for food is increasing worldwide.What is the cause of this?What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough? 61
- Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 89
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...of that will be thrown away as a waste. However, to keep up with this increasing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, however, moreover, really, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90570750329 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603846153846 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9498664266 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191154576105 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735615505789 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741463085275 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122961827676 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193460459472 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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