Demand for food is increasing worldwide.
What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?
Food plays a vital role in the develop of humans. Nowadays, the demand for food is on the rise and it caused by two main factors – the ever-expanding population and extreme changes in climate conditions. This is a global problem and we should find a solution to solve this issue.
The growing demand for food is the result of the ongoing population boom, which expected to reach approximately ten billion in 2050. Unfortunately, food production has not been keeping pace with this due to numerous reasons, such as climate change, the decline of agricultural land, and backward farming methods. Because of strongly dependent on weather, climate change makes a decrease in product yield. So, there might be a critical global food shortage.
However, this situation could be remedied by the expansion of the farmland and by using improved farming techniques. For instance, yield can be increased by using quality fertilizers, by developing vertical farming or by applying the new method for the production process. The government should have some solutions to support farmers. The global community needs to step in as well. Countries, where food is surplus, must show the willingness to export it to the poor countries at a reasonable price or free if it is possible. We need measures to cut population growth and limit the impact of climate change. We have to raise awareness of people for this.
In conclusion, besides implementing measures to reduce population growth and the effects of climate change, we need to work together to resolve the food crisis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Food plays a vital role in the develop of humans. Nowadays, the demand for foo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09727626459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84512171237 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5953307393 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4293968181 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235989977838 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702637968908 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484180729455 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138643137986 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590353968217 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.