describe a cafe place
FOODS COMBINATE BEVERAGES.
In this day and age, more and more coffee stores are planted everywhere with different styles like lovely, simple, elegant,... Everyman to his taste but personally, I would rather go for some high-fashioned and good-view places. Fortunately, I found the perfect shop called “ More than Coffee “ which I’m going to share with you right now .
“ More than Coffee “ accounted for a medium part among a relaxing area in Binh Duong province. The first impression when I paid visit this cafeteria are moderate luxurious and clear which give me a sense of satisfaction and friendliness. The brighter light will attract more attention so the owner grabs his customers ‘s interest from in and outside by many yellow hanging lights which is a color that signifies power. Yellow is not only the most visible color to the eyes but also help them stay true to their brand. In addition, the store is decorated with glass door and many big glass windows that not only allow you can follow everything outside but also make the room look more bigger and fresher. Beside its appearance, I found that their products are also appealing.
“More than Coffee “ is a useful combination between foods and beverages so it is suitable for those who are inclined to save value time like me. I think I understand this store’s name means as excepting Coffee, they serve caramel, matcha or chocolate ice blended, yogurt shake and many sorts of tea such as peach/lychee/jasmine tea as well. I am a big fan of oolong milk-tea with milk foam at there for a reason. Above of plastic cup is a greasy white milk foam and at the bottom has plentiful gloss and soft black pearls, especially that milk tea isn’t too sweet and I am able to felt oolong-flavored clearly . This is why I choose oolong milk-tea. When it comes to foods, some hot egg tarts lovely cupcakes and small tiramisu dishes are piled up in nice arrangement which created a feeling of safe and clean to me . Another point to remember is that you should get a garlic bread when having chance visit “ More than Coffee” since it is really worth trying one. A bread topped with garlic, olive and butter , it is crunchy on the outside and moist and moderate sweet butter inside. Futhermore, all of things are not prohibitively expensive so people can enjoy them with your family or a group of your friend. However, I have to admit that it was a bit disappointed to me when they use plastic cup for both being at place and taking away. I had given advice them and i hope they will make good their’s shortcoming.
It is not uncommon to find an elegant coffee store like this but i still highly recommend it for my friends and my family’s members who are bored to their old shop and need discover a strange charming place.
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| 2023-08-24 | anhthe | 61 | view |
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...who are bored to their old shop and need discover a strange charming place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, really, so, still, well, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2317.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 494.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69028340081 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58750581989 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 176.041082164 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591093117409 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4298875045 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.318181818 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13636363636 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0230326529199 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00610125261883 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194162926008 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0156377068948 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232345993059 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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