Describe the major stress factors in our modern lives and how do you manage them?
Nowadays, people have faced many challenges. Stress is also a “spotlight” issue in our industrialized and globalizated era. How do human beings solve this problem?
People usually run their lives so fast. They have been working under the high pressure for a long time. This means they could not spend much time for themselves or their beloved ones. Linh, a famous singer said that he had to move a lot and also tied up with a busy schedule. Sometimes, they all want to stay at home to cook their favorite dishes, watch their humorous sitcoms, etc. However, the strains of their jobs just make them lose these chances, which leads to stress with some common moods like sadness, depression, low self-esteem, and so on.
Although it seems difficult to deal with stress, most people agree that there are still solutions for this “disease of age”. People should cut down their loads of work and be aware of seeking their true goal, because they most think that owning much money is happiness. However, after hard-working days, they earned huge profits, but they still felt unpleasant. This is a good reason for them to reflect themselves and change their way of living. Besides, People could practice meditation to refresh their mind. Although they are busy with their work, they are supposed to take a few minutes to meditate. The stress is reduced effectively just after inhaling and exhaling.
In conclusion, there are many problems causing stress, today. People are still able to overcome this “era challenge” with some useful solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e faced many challenges. Stress is also a 'spotlight' issue in our indu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11627906977 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73295120599 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65503875969 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2797136136 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0802574667723 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299993279124 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378801195245 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615505164564 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415841683176 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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