Describe one of your favourite books you should say :
What kinds of books do you like?
What is your favourite book?
What is it about?
When did you get it?
Why do you like it?
Actually, for me, this topic evokes nostalgia. I wouldn’t say that I’m a bookworm or anything. In fact, I have read more books as a child than I did as a teenager or as an adult. This is because I was constantly engrossed in my studies, which consequently left me very little time for leisure activities. Thus, I’m going to speak about a book that I read as a child and why it is very special to me.
When I was 8 years old, my mother used to take me to the library every other weekend to buy a new book. Of course, the book had to be within a specific price range. One time, I found a 200-page book that told Disney princesses’ stories such as The Beauty and the Beast, Snow White and the seven dwarfs, and Cinderella. According to an 8-year-old girl who was crazy about Princesses, this was like a dream come true. It had all the stories of my favourite princesses with lively colorful paintings. Unfortunately, it was way out of budget. So, my mother and I had an agreement that I had to attain owning this book by behaving all week and achieving high marks on my weekly exams. The following weekend, she surprised me with the book. I was over the moon. The book was quiet captivating that I really couldn’t put it down. I read it all day long, around 5 times in total.
Since then, I’ve known all stories about princesses by heart, and I would retell them to my younger sisters as bedtime stories. Every time would do that, I would feel younger and happy again. I’ve read several books as I grew older of course, but this one will always have a special place in my heart.
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| 2019-12-23 | NadaKenawy | 56 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, if, really, so, then, thus, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78898428345 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593333333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9156342978 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9473684211 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137265084936 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438138517078 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333940628822 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894972204647 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235847686562 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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