Describe someone in your family who you like.
You should say:
How this person is related to you
What this person looks like
What kind of person he/she is
and explain why you like this person
The person in my family I really like and love is my son. He is a very special kid and I cannot imagine what I would be without him.
His nickname is Bumblebee and he is 5 years old. Physically, my son is chubby and cute. He is only about 120 centimeter tall, and weighs about 27 kilograms. He has thick, black hair and a fair complexion. In addition, he has the sunshine smile. One thing people often notice is that my son always takes pride in his appearance. He often says that he is a handsome boy, and believes in that everyone loves him.
Intellectually, my son loves learning, particularly English. He likes to watch the English teaching programs and cartoons on TV, then he imitates the characters in programs or cartoons to talk or write the new words. He is so intelligent, study quickly and has a good memory.
My son is so proactive, like to talk to the others and he has plenty of questions to ask me and his daddy. He is keen on dancing and loves the song “Oh ma ma” of BTS, one of the famous Korean bands. He wants to wear the same style with them and dance this song, he copies every actions and movement of BTS when he listens to this song.
To be honest, it is difficult for me to explain why I love him so much. Simply, because he is my son and due to the maternal love. I carried him 9 months during the pregnancy period and have taken care of him little by little from his infant phase up to now, see how he grows up daily, so I love all of him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2027972028 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41826887531 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5879226932 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7777777778 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133921926877 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422149595082 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446019438616 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802905105766 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376457607385 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.0946893788 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 12.4159519038 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.