Despite health warnings a large number of people continue to smoking all over world why should we be concerned about this What solutions would you suggest Give reasons for your answer and include any relative examples from your own knowledge or experience

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...inant concerns such as health disorders and elevation in air pollution along wi...
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...me possible measures. To commence with , smoking in public place is a bad habi...
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... smoking in public place is a bad habit . To explicate it , nowadays people does ...
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...ke to visit that places which surrounded by smokers. It is not only leads to he...
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... surrounded by smokers. It is not only leads to health diseases to addictive bu...
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...a survey conducted by ni revealed that ,80 present of pupils were sick because o...
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...re sick because of surrounded by smokers . In order to mitigate this issue , gover...
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...mokers . In order to mitigate this issue , government should ban the smoking in pu...
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...ernment should ban the smoking in public even also ban production of cigarette ....
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... even also ban production of cigarette . Moving further , the other prominent ...
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...roduction of cigarette . Moving further , the other prominent concern is, smokin...
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...oduction of cigarette . Moving further , the other prominent concern is, smoking...
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... other prominent concern is, smoking is destroy the air pollution. In other words , the...
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...estroy the air pollution. In other words , there are manifold corporation who did ...
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...ts to reduce air pollution but due to it , there all efforts just waste . For exa...
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...igarette. To tackle with these problem , people should have to aware towards the...
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...d consequences of smoking. To conclude , it is undeniable fact that smoking is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07423580786 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83709402336 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9976139567 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3846153846 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 50.0 5.01903807615 996% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128624215292 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431742380151 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250972650451 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673347191054 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275696119018 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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