Despite huge improvements in healthcare, the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What could bethe reason for this trend, and what can be done to reverse it.
There is no denying that individuals living in numerous thriving nations can see themselves having access to the growth and expansion of healthcare in present-day society. Nevertheless, the physical standard health amount is being subsided here. In this essay, I will point out two main factors contributes to this trend and put forward some feasible solutions helping people deal with it.
The most striking reason of poor health problem in developed countries is lifestyle. Apparently, the nations having the latest leading-edge technology generally and smart electronic devices especially has precipitated more passive lifestyles. After a day of hard working, most adults regularly tend to opt to unwind by lieing down, catching a movie or playing games console rather than doing outdoor sports, to say nothing of their office job which requires little physical activity. Additionally, nowadays people usually travel by car instead of walking or cycling regardless of whether workplace is far from their homes or not. Then came physical problems including impairing their bodily functions and agility, as this state has occurred constantly for a long time. Another cause that gives rise to serious repercussions for physical health is eating habit. The majority of people have comparatively lesstime to enjoy eating preparing home-made food because of being on go. Hence, they would rather eat fast foods much more than healthy foods by virtue of its convenience and addictive taste. As a result, not only the consumption of too much junk food makes them at far greater risk of unintentionally overweight and obesity but also increasing significantly their daily intake of dentrimental substances.
In order to deal with this problem, it is essential to get involvements in both individuals and governments. On the one hand, government should harness open spaces to construct pedestrianized streets, outdoor multi-sport courts and gyms for those who aim at achieving long-term weight loss or boosting their physical wellbeing. Therefore, people can be aroused to take regular exercise by having good enough facilities. Futhermore, a health channel, television show or a website also should be established to deliver straightforward lessons and news coverage about cools tip and knowledge to stay healthy in order to help people avoid being become prone to obesity or other illnesses. On the other hand, apart from the government's efforts, citizens should also try their utmost to break unhealthy habits and have leisure pursuits doing wonders for their physical bodies such as taking up sport. In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44059405941 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90486933549 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 176.041082164 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670792079208 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0436001523 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.294117647 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149877132293 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510550302211 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481146021614 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106274513335 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265207076287 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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